Just came to me and I scribbled it down. It might be the beginning of a new project:
“Don’t look back, somethin’ might be gainin’ on you.”
New Orleans, Louisiana August 28, 2005
His entire life he’d heeded those words. His daddy’s mantra, borrowed from the great Satchel. “That’s as good advice as any given by a man, no matter what color his skin is.” So no, he’d never looked back. Always looked forward. Always forged ahead. But the joke was on him now. Because that thing that was gaining was coming from ahead, rushing headlong towards them with speed and fury and an unforgiving wrath that roared and howled at the injustice, but refused to let up, to divert its course. Oddly, he wasn’t frightened. No, if anything, he was hopeful. Hope. A simple word holding so much weight. There was hope it would all be swept away—the dirt and filth and lack of decency. Hope that the demons and monsters would be swallowed whole and erased—leaving nothing in their wake but perhaps the merest spun sugar dust sparkling in air washed clean and new. Evidence that once, they’d been good.
Despite appearances to the contrary, they’d been good.
Once upon a time.
It had all once been so very, very good.
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Dang girl! That just came off the top of your head? I bow to your genius!